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Thursday 21 May 2020

charlie Hears voices Chapter one


Today in Literacy my Teacher gave me a story charlie bone in my writing
is who was in the story and what kind of person that person is 
Who?    Charlie a boy he might be 9-10 His tall and skinny His
brave thick hair caring kind Good friend 


Benjamin he could be 9-10 tall and skinny He has no friends other
words he's a loner 


Grandma bone she old really bossy mean she has grey/white hair
she wrinkled she like black dresses and grey colour cloths


Grandma Macy she old she  wrinkled 


Mum she charlie Mum she old she married she like colour cloths kind 


Dad: Hi Charlie's charlie dad. He's married , kind and caring, and loves
his family.


Charlie started hearing the sound  fire engine and a picture started
talking to him.


Were i think in their house because the story did’t say were the place was 

Why charlie thought that he disappointed grandma bone because he
said that he not magic and that he was hearing sounds and a picture was
talking to him

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