On Friday 10 my sisters and cousin took me out to eat at Hong Kong Kitchen
because on the same day I got my Honours badge.
because on the same day I got my Honours badge.
We took the food to the park to eat it. I ate rice and pork
After that we went on the basket swing we were screaming laughing
After the park we went to dunkin donuts then went home and slept
I feel really that I got to celebrate getting an Honours badge and that I got
to celebrate with my sisters and cousin.
to celebrate with my sisters and cousin.
Hi Zahara! I am Alvin from YMS. I really like your blog it sounds like a very good holiday! I wonder how you got your Honours badge. next time you could take some photos to share on your blog! also you could think about asking people soem questions like have you been there... but other than that great job!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora I'm Jorja from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you have said what you did in the holidays.
Did you think about adding photos into your blog, (if you took any photos).
Next time you could add a slide in and add photos in, (if you took any photos).
Kind Regards Jorja.
Hi Zahara, I'm Zahrah from YMS.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you wrote your story rather than putting a image of it.
Did you think about adding a question in there?
Next time, you could read your piece of writing first before publishing it.
Cya later!
-Zahrah!
Pffft, say that out loud. "hi Zahara, I'm Zahrah!" It sounds weird. -_-
DeleteHi Zahara! My name's Hana, and I'm a year 6 From Yaldhurst Model School!
ReplyDeleteCool Zahara! You're lucky you got to go to Hong Kong! It's SO cool! Disneyland is my favourite part of going there! I can also imagine dunkin doughnuts MUST have been delicious! I've never been there before though.
I went to Hong Kong last year! just before Covid-19, Which was lucky. We also got stuck in the protesting at the airport. We barely got out. Protests are dangerous. Some people start attacking others, and it can come to explosives!
Next time, perhaps you could create a DLO to go with an introduction. Some photos would be nice.
Keep up the great work!
- Hana
Hi Zaraha,
ReplyDeleteI am Alan from Yaldhurst Model School. Your blog was Amazing. I really hoped you felt the way you wrote in the blog post. If you want you can make the blog more detailed. And say how you got the honours badge.
Kind regards
Alan