Hello Zahara, It's ME Bridget here from Yaldhurst Model School. I Like how you added a DLO but maybe next time you could write something like a into or something else to explain what this is for. Ka Pai Bridget.
Kia Ora! My name is Maddison a year 8 From Yaldhurst Model School.
I think that this is a great idea to share lots of information about what is going on to help others around you I think that thi is a good way of paying it forward.
I love how you have presented it and I think that this is a great was to share but I think that you could have created it so it has more colour and is more interesting and fun. I think that you could also right some more things to go along with it like an intro or a conclusion or maybe even ask some questions.
Thank you for this amazing blog post and stay safe. -Maddie.
Hello Zahara,
ReplyDeleteIt's ME Bridget here from Yaldhurst Model School. I Like how you added a DLO but maybe next time you could write something like a into or something else to explain what this is for. Ka Pai
Bridget.
Kia Ora!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddison a year 8 From Yaldhurst Model School.
I think that this is a great idea to share lots of information about what is going on to help others around you I think that thi is a good way of paying it forward.
I love how you have presented it and I think that this is a great was to share but I think that you could have created it so it has more colour and is more interesting and fun. I think that you could also right some more things to go along with it like an intro or a conclusion or maybe even ask some questions.
Thank you for this amazing blog post and stay safe.
-Maddie.