Kia Ora ! My name is Maddiosn I am a year 8 and I go to Yaldhurst Model School.
I think that this is a wonderful idea to post about and I like that you added in an image that matches that blog post. There is a few things that you might like to improve on. One of them being to ask some questions and to tell us a bit more about your house and why you have made this blog post. I really liked how the text you wrote made sense!
I see that you like jewelry. So do I. I have a huge gold jewelry box what's your favorite earing you have and why?
Hello my name is Skylah from Greymain school i liked your post about what you liked in your house maybe you could put more things that you like about you house from Skylah
Kia Ora !
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddiosn I am a year 8 and I go to Yaldhurst Model School.
I think that this is a wonderful idea to post about and I like that you added in an image that matches that blog post.
There is a few things that you might like to improve on. One of them being to ask some questions and to tell us a bit more about your house and why you have made this blog post.
I really liked how the text you wrote made sense!
I see that you like jewelry. So do I. I have a huge gold jewelry box what's your favorite earing you have and why?
-Maddie
Kia Ora I'm Jorja from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you said what you liked about your house.
Did you think about putting what you like about your house into a slide.
Next time, you could put what you like about your house into a slide.
Kind Regards Jorja.
Hey Zahara, I'm Zahrah from YMS!
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you've put a question in so people comment and answer.
Did you think about adding some decoration or something?
Next time, you could add a slide to have your learnings clear.
Cya Zahara!
-Zahrah😜
HI Zahara I'm Renae a year 6 at Yaldhurst Model School!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the part when you explained why you liked your house!
Maybe next time you could add your most favorite part of your house!
Did you think about putting your favourite things of your house into a video or slide?
Kind Regards
-Renae
Kia ora Zahara im am a year 8 at grey main school.
ReplyDeletei really like the way you have explained why you like you house.
maybe next you could put more of the parts of your house you like.
kind regards
~ shilah ~
Hello my name is Skylah from Greymain school i liked your post about what you liked in your house maybe you could put more things that you like about you house from Skylah
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